All Comments on 'Neighbors Make Great Lovers...'

Outstanding story from a new writer here. Nice to know sexy young women think of us older guys!

Read through you poems and enjoyed them, but hope to see more stories from you. Please keep writing.

It is nice to know that a young woman likes to fuck an older man...being 62 myself, I was about to give up hope. But most of us older guys want to do it in the pussy, not the asshole, and if we can, we'd like to have a descendant to give our stuff to in a couple of years after we are gone, or to at least see some grandchildren before we go. And in the process maybe make some younger woman a rich widow at maybe 50 years old? don87654@televar.com

Sardines? Nope... Pussy? Nope... Tuna? Now we're getting closer, almost like the writings of a dirty old man who would like to 'tune her' - I hope that I'm wrong, but just a tad too 'in-ya-face' for chicks of my acquaintence.

....an asshole isn't a pussy & it takes a helluvalot more time than you implied for a well-endowed man to fuck a virgin(?) asshole. It takes times & patience & maybe even a little luck. You imply that her asshole was as big as her pussy. Don't really think so. Other than that, it was a fairly good anal effort.

nice! Keep working on your stories and developing the potential and the hotness we see in your work.

love, Carson

Not great plot development, but it was short, sweet and erotic. how can criticize that? 60 year old George

Just wanted to thank those that gave/give feedback. As a new writer I appreciate it, yes even the not so positive feedback :)

Thanks again

Nikki

ACE Girl ACE,keep it coming,forget the low ratings. They come from folk who at the moment, are unable to see a great story delivered. Without 12 inch wands 2gallons of juice and 10 people involved.

Loved it

A nice fuck-story nikki.

But please delete the last sentence - it's a "readers' letters" cliche and is not only completely redundant, but it breaks the spell.

Prior context is nicely (for a story like this) minimalist: enough for readers to suspend disbelief and not a word more.

Leave the reader free to imagine what follows - that's (IMHO) far more effective. Maybe they've fucked like bunnies ever since, maybe they get married, maybe it was a one-off - maybe there'll be a sequel...

The rest is too good for an anticlimax like that.

Eff

Short and sweet and right to the point. It was great. I knew ya had it in ya to publish your writing. I'm glad you've done it. Your poems are wonderful and now I have this too look forward to as well. If I have one suggestion it is, next time to build up to it. Take your time like you would in real life given the same situation. I know I would take as much time as I could.

Good story, but I think it all happened a little too fast. I think you could have built more anticipation into the story and more sex. Don't get me wrong, I liked it. Its just it was over too quick for me.

I see lots of potential for this story to grow and develop into quite a torrid little affair. The sexy older man can be quite a hot teacher. Great beginning - add more details and context and develop your characters further, and you'll have a sexy series going.

You did really good at this one hone. It may be short, but it is full of sex an smore sex!!! I like baby!!! Can I bend you over the arm of my couch??

Great job, Nikki! Can't wait to read more of your works!

~Honey

This story has definite potential, but it is tooooooo short!

Also, if you put on a flimsy (or equivalent) dress before he came over and you wanted him "in you" so badly, would you have worn panties, a bra, or anything under that sexy dress? Do you know that "no underwear" is a definite turn on for a man and a man would have to be a "pinocuoole" to not get a woody at a woman that was on a swing set in a short or flimsy dress that wanted that man to fuck her?

I hope you really examine your thoughts on this and will give us some more chapters to this story, as like I said above, it definitely has some potential.... Thanks, Don

great job! .. nice imagery .. more more .. hope there's another few chapters coming

Very hot vignette, clear and intense

Arousing story, it started out hot and was hot all the way though. Please stretch it out more, build up the suspense and anticipation.

Real hot kept my pussy wet from start to finish. Could have been a little longer still hot.

Great Story nikki, looking fwd to reading more from you :).

Nikki, I was thrilled to see this story! You have a great imagination and writing skills to match. These things never happen in real life, but we can continue to dream and imagine and write.

I secretly let my neighbor fuck my ass and I must admit I truly enjoyed it. Though my husband doesn't know about it I feel I must tell him. The neighbor has become a pain in the butt and threatens to tell my husband if I will not let him fuck my ass again. He has been hanging around with my husband alot lately and is always calling me at home when my husband is away. He whistles at me when I'm outside by myself that the other neighbors have started to ask what is going on. Oh what did I get myself into.

Overall, not a bad story but very rushed. You should have taken longer to develop it.

Rob the neighbour is older than me,but charming,tall,55,i am 36,my husband is always drunk,comes home,sleeps,snores.I had hung my washing on the balcony,my panties and bras.I heard a knock,it was Rob,holding 2 pairs of my panties,they had blown off in the wind.I was embarrassed,but he smiled,i invited him in,i liked him a lot,i had fantasised about him when he was swimming in his pool,my pussy got very wet.I am a little plump,so i am a bit self conscious in my swimwear but Rob said i looked great in it,my husband just grunts.Well,Rob made a comment when we sat down,he said he thought about keeping them but didnt want me to walk around without any.I got bold,i stood,what the heck,and lifted my dress and said you were right,i havent got any more,exposing my pussy.I let my dress down quickly,he stood and said dont do that,i liked what i saw.I slowly lifted my dress up,Rob moved over and stroked my pussy,my heart raced.Lets get more comfortable,as he stepped back,removing his clothes.i couldnt help but look down,nice thick cock,my pussy was getting wet.I took my clothes off,he said lets lie down,as soon as i did he moved over me and placed his tongue on my pussy,slowly licking,something my husband had not done for years,gently,slowly,i could feel my orgasm rising,i yelled yes,dont stop as he bought me to a savage orgasm,it seemed to go on for ages,and at the end i felt totally drained.I felt Rob moving up,yes push that cock into me,the head at my pussy,then i remembered,no cotraception,i pulled back,no,Rob looked surprised,a condom,im not on the pill.Rob said i dont have any,i looked at him,i wanted him inside me.Then i thought,well i have heard about anal but never tried,i looked at Rob and said in my bottom but be careful it will be my first time.He looked at me,are you sure,i said,no but lets try,he said we will need some oil,i told him in the ensuite,he came back,he pushed an oily finger into me,moving it around,then a second,no pain but uncomfortable,he removed them,then he lifted my legs,moved forward and i felt the head of his cock at my virgin hole.He pushed forward,i wouldnt open,he said relax,leaning back,stroking my clit,oh yeh,felt good,then the head of his cock eased into my bottom.I let out a yelp,it felt huge,he kept stroking my clit,easing forward,it felt good and bad,until he seemed to with one easy push go all the way into my bottom.He waited,i was too scared to move,then he lay on top of me,looked me in the eye and started to fuck my bottom with small slow movements.He felt big,but after awhile he was fucking in and out of me,telling me,how good it felt,how tight i was and how i was going to make him cumm.he grabbed my hand and put it on my clit,that felt good,so i moved my hand,i was quite practised at this as he fucked my bottom,faster now,i was saying yes,my ankles around him pulling him to me,his hard cock deep inside,i felt him swell,making me orgasm again and i felt my insides get very warm,then it seemed easier as he kept on fucking,i wanted him to,but he pulled out,i complained but he rolled me on my side,pushing his cock back into my bottom and holding onto my tits kept fucking,i was surprised he was still hard,i pushed back at him,his cock in me very deep and then i felt him shudder,and he slowed and finally pulled out.That was my first,it has not been my last,Rob comes over during the day,he has had my pussy with a condom,i have sucked him till he fills my mouth but the thing we both look the most forward too is when Rob pushes his thick cock into my bottom,this brings us both the most intense orgasms.I am definately an anal convert.

This story was great, Nikki!!! Got hard from the beginning and stayed hard till the end! Anal sex is incredible!!