by newfield1981
I prefer the original starting Ch.01 over this re-write. This introduction to the series is too clouded with presumptions, instead of being spontaneous like the original. Agreed there was some missing dialog in the later part of the "Original". 2 stars.
I like the original beginning more, it is more exciting and presents both the dominant and his approach to Sissa much better. It is also important to describe sex. Maybe there are some dialogues in the original part but it doesn't get worse at all.
Regards from Warsaw Sissiboy.
Bardziej podoba Mi się orginalny początek, jest bardziej emocjonujący i o wiele lepiej przedstawia zarówno dominującego i jego podejście do sissy. Ważne jest też sposób opisu seksu. Może w orginalnej części brak jest niektórych dialogów ale to wcale nie sprawia go gorszego.
Pozdrawiam z Warszawy SissyBoy.
excellent start hope he gets mommy involved too & they can eat his cum from each other!!
The original was fine, no need for a rewrite. daddies are supposed to be dominant
I preferred the rewrite as it's a better introduction and much improved narrative while retaining the immediate and sexual aspects of the original. I am interested to see how it develops.
Luv Tracey 🎀
Ithink thair both great chapter1s i love beong used like that and that fact that he is going to bring his friends over to fuck the sissy and pimp the little cum slut that stole my nick name iam the queen of cum slut whores and if any one doesent think so ill prove it to any one that wants to use my throat or ass love dp in both my holes have to nice size dildows runing away in my ass as iam reading and stroking my cock than iam going to shoot my load down my throat and can lick the and suck my tip of my cock to suck out all my jiz i dont wadte a good load of sweet cream shure like to prove it to your fan club and hopefully yournfirst in line love you and your wet stories cum slut tiffney m
Yeah, that kind of neighbor that I hope will move into the apartment next to me, as my current neighbor is moving out in about 3 weeks time, but it will probably just be a hope, I could never be that lucky... ;-)
I like this re-write better. I don't like S&M, so I don't like that Greg smacked the sissy immediately upon entering the apartment. Too harsh. Having a Daddy who treats his sissies a bit more gently and lovingly is better.
I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this series.
why would you not smack your sissy upon establishing dominance over the sub sissy cockslut. the same as when the sissy doesnt obey or cant do it right, spankings and caning are in order. very good chapter. hope it gets better