All Comments on 'Neighbourhood Discipline Pt. 04'

One tell-tale sign of an author’s recognition of the quality of their own work is that they begin to get shorter and shorter as the desire to “keep them wanting more” begins to kick in. These last 2 chapters illustrates that point perfectly!

While I won’t be critical about that, I WILL point out that it becomes incumbent on said authors to feed that hunger they have deliberately ratcheted up a notch by decreasing the lull between releases commensurate with the decrease in the size/length of the chapters. 😉

With that being said, I look forward to the next release of this most excellent series!

X-Man

I have really enjoyed this series - I love the story so far, please keep writing

Loved the series and hoping for its continued development, would love to have a neighbor like Janet

There appears to be a bit missing between three and four.