All Comments on 'Neighbourhood Psychologist Ch. 01'

by Rhythm_N_Ooze

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
yawn

sorry but bruce almighty is not here and a Psychologist has no clue of drugs or hypnosis and everything so predictable I almost fell asleep .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Improper use of Pronouns!!!

You repeatedly use the words he or she - but so often it gets to be impossible to know who you are talking about!! I repeatedly found myself have to re-read portions to find out who are you talking about. ONCE I believe the person talking CHANGES and BOTH times you mention HE did this then HE did that - but they are different people. Totally ruined the story for me!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Kind of humor tale of hilarious infantile characters playing wanna make believe happy-fucky-around-tha-block in psycho la la land.

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