All Comments on 'Neighbourly Surprise Ch. 06'

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Good story, a little short

The story needs filled out in the later part. The exploration of their discoveries needs to be part of the story, not just a phrase.

LearningfastLearningfastover 4 years agoAuthor
More parts to come.

Hey Rosie, keep watching. There is much more to emerge as this story develops. Part 2 coming soon.

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Wonderful life of excitement and erotic experiences, which are behind my fiction, and which I enjoy writing. Professional and very proper gentleman in public, and rather a naughty boy in private. Some of my stories are suggested by my lady partner, and maybe they are the best....