All Comments on 'Neighbours'

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R_PetersonR_Petersonover 16 years ago
Wonderfully delicious.

Packed full of emotion. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Please continue the story. I am looking forward to part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Spelling and grammar is all over the place which is a shame as it spoils what could be a good story.

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