All Comments on 'Nellie Ch. 01'

Funny, witty, and hot. Look forward to more from you.

let's see now---four conjoined breasts below the belly button; fore teats maybe 2 1/2 inches long, a inch diameter; hind teats a bit smaller. I wish you hadn't written that comparison. Had to wait for a proper description later on to clear the dairy image.

Now let me tell you about the gorilla my dreams...

Good story, five goldies.

great story . I was disappointed that he did not return the favor orally but maybe on the next go around???

for different folks! The trite-man has started! What a dream to get to have sex with an enthusiastic teenager. I'm not a big tit man. Would prefer B or C cups at most. Love long and suckable nipples. Cannot imagine sex without tasting the woman. Love to lick and suck a pussy and a clit. Also would have sucked her toes and licked her feet and rubbed my cock on her feet. But we all like different things. Great story - five stars. Thank you.

Omfg that was soooo hot! It was amazing and I can't wait for no. 2!!!

Great story but he made a fundamental mistake. If your wife/girlfriend ever suggests that you should have sex with someone else ALWAYS make it clear at once that this does not imply your consent that she can do the same. Otherwise the day will surely come when you hear the words,

"If it was OK for you then it's OK for me"

This guy was lucky-it was only a dog. It might have been a 'cute guy she met at the gym'.

Listen to the voice of bitter experience!

I've been wanting to write a story like this for a long time. Just couldn't put it together. You give me new inspiration now. A great read indeed and can't wait to read part two.

A well earned5. Great story and fantastic content, solid all around and just love your women.

I was not very far into it when -- just from the masterful way it's written, not yet knowing where it was going -- I thought, "Too bad this author has not written anything more or since these few four submissions."

I have now read, and am glad that we have, all 4 chapters.

Paul in Oklahoma

Didn't like the end re the dog.

Perfection!

There are several defloration memes that this piece invokes - not the hymen as an almost irresistible barrier, but multiple acts of penetration and our newly ex-virgin keeps coming back for more - not sore - no muscles stretched - no mention of birth control - Nellie uses an F cup but her tits aren't as big as Danielle's -

Pretty routine