by ExtremelyAnonymous
You must write the rest of this long story. You really have talent. It could become a great novel. I will keep reading it.
Thank you all so much for the glowing feedback! I'm definitely planning on writing more in this series but don't hold your breath, this one took me forever.
I gave this a 5. Good start on what can be a hot series. A good way to explore your own fantasies, too!