by JukeboxEMCSA
Ive watched your work for a long long time and I pretty much just come here to read your stuff and wow this is by far my favorite I usually dont write comments but I felt like for this one I should cause no one else is and I absolutely love this. I hope you continue improving like this.
Another amazing story. I love your writing. Please don't keep us waiting long for Lesson Two.
pulled me kicking and screaming into Bev and Rob's world.
Lesson 2. Sir ?
I absolutely support the idea of making this into a series. It's not even the sexiest of your stories, but it has a world and a premise I want to see so much more of. Lesson 2 should definitely happen.
Was this erotic?
No, not really. Execpt for the scene with the Flight Attendant, it wasn't erotic for me. Unless your into someone selling their life away for twenty years until they eventually commit suicide. Hey, if you're into that I'm not going to object. However, I don't think that was really the point.
Was this good?
Hell-the-fuck-yea! The story pulled me in and got me curious about this mysterious character, then made me feel pure sympathy for 'Bev' until the end where everything pulls back and says a lot about the Neuromancer himself. Loved it. Please make this a series.
This may be one of your best yet. Tied with Smoke From an Old Flame, which is my favorite of yours. What would make it the best is what others have been saying: make this a series! Please! There is SO much potential here. Thanks for the great read !
This was a damn scary story, really. Somebody with this sort of power would rate as a very dangerous person. Hard to believe that sort of person could remain sane over any length of time either. Scary, scary, story.
You should write more. This is a great short story. But its not really erotica, at least not to me or, i think, most people.
This was a really interesting diversion from some of your regular stuff. This is a story to which I would definitely read the entire series.
Haven't ready your stuff before. Now have to read all of it. A very weird, very compelling story. A series built around this premise would be wonderful.
Holy fucking shit jukebox... Reading this WHILE MIDST OF WHIP IT was literally surreal as fuck. Jesus.
Also thank you for all your MC everything. Can you please put all the Girl(tm) chapters in the same section? I would love to read them chronologically ❤️