by bellerebelle
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME, AFTER 11 YEARS THEY HAVE NEVER FINISHED THIS STORY. IT SHOULD BE REMOVED!!!!!!!!
A good chapter for what seems like a great story.
Although I am a man, I recognize that we are usually quite thick in our relationships with women. Never forget that, normally, women are much more mature than men at the same age.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
This was very well done. The descriptions, character definitions, tension and conflicts (internal & external) make for a terrific read. Please provide the additional chapter(s) quickly as you have me hooked.
this is really some great writing for your first romance story.
I'm hooked.
*****
Hi! Thank you all soooo much for reading, voting and commenting! I really appreciate it! I just submitted chapter 2, so it should be posted in the next few days. I'm enjoying writing and will keep going as long as you're interested in reading. Thank you!
~Belle~
I wondering if your gonna skip to the future or what.... please update soon!
Scott is an idiot. Not for losing the moment of passion, but for his absolute failure to recognize that he wants/needs Gia in his life.
Excellent writing. Looking forward to ch.02.
you have a great story here... nice beginning. keep writing, just check for grammar errors. i will be looking for the next chapters.
Same as above, great story, keep going!