All Comments on 'Never Cross a Witch Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I hope Regina eventually loves it

jmcidlv15jmcidlv15about 4 years agoAuthor
Next Part

I have the next two parts posted on my deviant art page: https://www.deviantart.com/jmcidlv15

You just might get your wish ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
wow

this one was straight up evil. you really need to work more on your mc's, they always seems to be the villains instead. tho this is just the first part so i still can't say for sure what/feel i think about it.

jmcidlv15jmcidlv15about 3 years agoAuthor

I write what I like, and she becomes more of a supporting character going forward. Next few chapters are posted on the link above

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

as you always should(well, not really always but you get it). oh, so she wasn't the mc? my bad uce. i saw it before, idk why i didn't read it back then, but i will now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

finally read the other parts. it had it's moments, but overral i didn't enjoy it. or at least enjoyed it less than your other story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

you're welcome.

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