All Comments on 'Never Going to Lose Me'

interesting!

5

This would be perfect for more chapters. You got a great start.

Not sure what to make of this but it grabs your attention. Thanks

WTF?

Ditto, add more chapters.

You need to finish the story. FTDS

Good read...lets you make some conclusions of your own....

Lol do ppl know what they're reading? It's 750 words! A lot of stuff is going to be implied. It doesn't lend itself to more chapters bc ppl are supposed to not be lazy and draw their own inferences. 5

Whohhh, did not see that coming, what a plot twist! It's hard to do anything in 750 words but you could figure out their history and what happened next (obviously no white wedding). Five stars!

I like how this leaves so many things open ended. A reader could practically write their own story from here.

It is 750 words. I do think this could be an interesting longer story, however. Good job.

What story? Just a bunch of words. Could have been a lot better with an ending.

I like how things are left up in the air. Well done.

Shame it wasn't longer as to explain why Bill had to die

LOL. What an interesting piece! As I've said before, your writing and imagination are intriguing and brilliant. Your ending is so open-ended that I trust your imagination can carry this story further, if you so choose.

As always , anxiously await your next work(s).

Thanks again for sharing.

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I know that it’s only supposed to be 750 words, but I wanted more.

Outstanding