All Comments on 'Never Have I Ever'

very well written but some how "swapping" does n't feel like romance to me, especially when they have kids with them. Kids will pick up on this somehow. Maybe if they lost their spouses and they are finally together? That is romance.

Really like this story, hope to read more from you

the moment I saw this fundamentally broken attempt at writing dialogue, I just gave up and skipped the next 5 pages.

The cheating kept it from being fun. Perhaps Erotic Couplings or Loving Wives are more appropriate categories.

It was a bit weary with all that bold face type for conversations. The story was interesting and sensual.

Difficult to read. Bold print rather than quotation marks and other proper forms of punctuation does not work. If you want to post a story, learn punctuation, please. When someone says "well written", do not believe them. This is barely written.

Good story, but you needed some back story on the two spouses, and how they agreed to let this happen

This was extremely well thought out, written, and presented. Well done! Keep up the excellent work.

Phenomenal. Excellent playful banter leading up to the finish. The whole scene is quite erotic. I fantasize about living this someday, to be honest. I like the bold print and the clarity of who is speaking in your dialog. It makes it easy to follow when there is so much back-and-forth. This is one of the best I've read on Literotica. More, please!

More!

The terrible formatting taking place of punctuation made this impossible to read. Also, this is definitely out of place in Romance.

I agree with Anonymous below: "the moment I saw this fundamentally broken attempt at writing dialogue, I just gave up and skipped the next 5 pages." Same, dude. Same. And with other Anonymous' pointing out that this isn't a Romance story.

Excellent. The development of the characters and the plot was wonderful. Unlike other comments, I am not an English teacher needing to grade a paper. As a consumer of the story I say Bravo and I look forward to the next chapters for Shasha & Derek