by rawlyrawls
I don't know why, but I loved this series. I really hope that you do a spin-off some day.
Maybe with Ummul and his 4 wives settling down on a strange planet or outpost station were it all starts over again with new problems, new races ... and new wives.
And another one with Claire giving birth to Ummuls child. The halfbreed grows fast and in just a year he is sexually matured. And since Claire regrets not following Ummul she ends up being her sons first wife.
5 STARS
I know that it was indicated that this was the finale... But please ... More
can't get past her being a cheating wife. I would have enjoyed this 3x as much if not for that.
An unsatisfying ending, leaving the whole work hanging *in media res* so as to speak.
The 7 chapters feel like a bleeding chunk ripped from a larger whole. It was great while it lasted though.
Where, indeed? Not a good finale! There should be more chapters! Planet landfall, a together home, a new life, and what do the mixed kids look like???