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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very well written! I enjoy the brevity and placement of your descriptives! These subtle nuances add a tremendous amount of depth to 'Eric's' world, in a very unobtrusive, almost nonchalant way. Great style. 👍🏼

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn. Very hot I can't wait for part 2

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It's been years since I've done any writing. Trying to get back into the swing of things. Please let me know what things you think I could improve on. :) Also into roleplaying, so if you like detailed, turn-based RP, feel free to hit me up.