Very well written! I enjoy the brevity and placement of your descriptives! These subtle nuances add a tremendous amount of depth to 'Eric's' world, in a very unobtrusive, almost nonchalant way. Great style. 👍🏼
It's been years since I've done any writing. Trying to get back into the swing of things. Please let me know what things you think I could improve on. :) Also into roleplaying, so if you like detailed, turn-based RP, feel free to hit me up.