All Comments on 'Never Quit'

by homerdepot

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

dull

sp9983sp9983almost 3 years ago

The writing is dull, the male character is an asshole who would never get laid irl. The author uses the same 3 phrases over and over. He needs a thesaurus.

LookOldButFeelYoungLookOldButFeelYoungalmost 3 years ago

What a crude waste of time..........

WetheNorthWetheNorthalmost 3 years ago
Juvenile writing style

Too much repetition

cageysea9725cageysea9725almost 3 years ago

All of you people giving this person derogatory comments give them too much credit. At this point in their writing career, it's obvious they have absolutely no intention of becoming a writer.

Tell them the truth: they have zero skill or talent, and should stop humiliating themselves by publishing their garbage anywhere. The simple act of them stringing words together is a total waste of their time and the people unfortunate enough to read it.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 3 years ago

The tone of this story was all wrong for me. I did give you 4*s, but...

This is the first of your stories that I have read, I'll try one more...

OseekerOseeker10 months ago

Brat son & I didn't get off at all.

1 star 'cuz I couldn't rate a zero

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