All Comments on 'Never Say Never'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A bit too far from reality for my liking. Being a 62 year old widow I could see myself being seduced by a young man, but not four, and certainly not like this. As I said, too far from the real world.

chytownchytownalmost 3 years ago

***Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The writing was absolutely terrible in every way, from the basics on.

I barely made it past the first few paragraphs before I just couldn't take any more.

If you intend to continue, please get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A lonely mature woman wanting sex with a younger man is one thing and could have been fun, possibly even beautiful, but instead, this went Full Juvenile. Don’t go Full Juvenile.

ChelieBelieChelieBelieover 2 years ago

Lol. 6O yr old female climaxed one too many times. Call the paramedics. Oh god this was hilarious 😂

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Retired engineer, retired on the coast. My writing background has been technical writing. The works of writers like saddletramp1956 and kalimaxos inspired me to give it a try. I enjoy comments from published authors, in most cases the comments are helpful. Anonymous comments...

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