All Comments on 'Never Say Never'

I don't feel it was necessary to show her side of the story, we learned all of that from the dialogue in his POV. Otherwise, a good one though short.

“ However hard we try to do the right and moral thing; our humanity and our emotions can still betray us. Love is not just blind or sometimes causes hurt, it can be very inconvenient. Sometimes if we are lucky we can get a second or even third chance at getting things right.”

So. Damn. True. 💜

Interesting story!

5

Beautiful. We all have our problems, shortcomings, and dreams. Happy to see dreams come true.

-jog

Well. What a thoroughly pleasing read! Well written with believeable characters and backdrops. 10/10 Sir. I salute you!

This one’s another great story. The characters are vivid, interesting, and likable. The setting is clear and contributes to the story. Most of all, the story is poignant and engaging.

Once again, thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Thanks for the kind remarks. Feedback helps to both direct my writing for next time and fuel the appetite to do it

All praise well deserved. I would like to add that the moral stance taken is appreciated

DP

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