All Comments on 'Never That Bold Ch. 05'

Okay let me get this straight. The main character is a woman with 3 children (I think from 3 different men). She gets a decent settlement from one of her husbands (Derick) and gets a degree in Teaching (am sure she has loans to pay still). Cannot get a job as a teacher through an agency (as if there are not lots of teaching jobs available). Gets a job in the middle of nowhere and gets paid $28,000 a year. Then gives up her kids and has to pay $750 a month in child support and $350 a month in rent (at $28,000 (before taxes) a year that is a hell of a lot, can she even make ends meet). Your story is crude and very unbelievable. You could have done so much more with this story but since you have no talent for writing at all, I assume this is your best. Please stop writing until you know what you are doing.

Like trying to digest concrete.