All Comments on 'New Adventures Ch. 02'

Still a nice premise.

But too much storyline before the sex, most of which didn't add anything.

And the sex was rushed.

Sure could have used som extended, and serious, foreplay before he ate her pussy. What was the rush? Her ass was tight there in front of him, yet he barely did anything but kiss it quickly. He noted her asshole, but didn't approach it, touch it, lick it, or anything. Must be a reason...

She did nothing back to him. Why?

Fewer spelling and grammar errors than first chapter. That's a plus.

Four stars.