All Comments on 'New Beginnings'

I love your story and hope there is more to come from them. I also like that the talked and were almost friends first. please write more soon

Beautifully written, and explicitly descriptive, both of the feelings and the eroticism. Keep those stories cumming

Thank you both for taking the time to read my story and for your lovely comments. I am glad that you both enjoyed this one. I have plenty of more stories to come, I just need time to do some editing on them first. I hope that you like them as much as you like this one. Unykorn

Really loved your story. Sexy and well written.

One question... How is it devastatingly hot and close to being summer and then suddenly almost Christmas?

Thank you for reading my story and for your comments. I appreciate the feedback. To answer your question, I am in Australia and Christmas is exceedingly hot, and humid, because it is in the middle of our summer. I would love to actually have a White Christmas but it will never happen here in the sub-tropics. Unykorn

You write wonderful stories. This story starts out so much like strangers becoming friends, but she knows instinctively something is familiar about him. It may have been the way she knew he was dominant or that she had seen him before and not remembered. I would like to read more of this couple but it does stand well on its own as well. You have a way of bringing your stories slowly but definitely to an erotic head.

Thank you. I am glad that you are enjoying my stories and I hope that you continue to do so. Some of my stories start off faster than others, it depends on whether or not they are already an established couple when the story starts or if they are getting together for the first time. All I can do is write what comes to me as it comes and hope that others enjoy reading what I have written. Unykorn

An erotic well told tale by someone that knows what she is talking about. Thank you.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. I always appreciate feedback. I am also glad that you enjoyed my Scene. Unykorn

Her stories stand alone as excellent literary efforts and the crowning achievement is her ability to portray with equal facility the tenderness as well as the intensity of her sexual experiences. Together they constitute the very finest erotic fiction--or is it fact.

Either way her work deserves more than the maximum 5 stars I'm allowed to award.

This is an incredible story, beautifully written. You are indeed an amazing wordsmith. The phrasing is tight, perfect in descrptions of person, place, time, emotions. Thank you for sharing this masterclass in true D/s sexuality. Perfectly brilliant.

My goodness that is a very glowing comment! I am a bit overwhelmed by it. I am very glad that you have enjoyed your read of my stories so far. And I hope that you continue to do so as I post more of them. Thank you. Unykorn

Oh my! Another raving review! I'm a bit gob smacked! Thank you so much for reading my story and for taking the time to leave a comment. I truly appreciate it and I hope that you enjoy any of my other stories that you read. Thank you! Unykorn