by LeanneSinclair
Extraordinary. The pace is perfect The sexual energy is captivating. I feel what I perceive to be the emotions of the characters. I keep reading and enjoying to the end. More please.
Such a fascinating story and characters you have created. Thank you for sharing. John
Not a fan of the Third Person commentary personally but loved this story. I’ll look up your others.
Absolutely awesome. It added to Ch.1.
Just a pity it has not developed further!
The perfect threesome! One dominant woman and one submissive... I came so hard to this. Thanks!
Wonderful tale of the Dominant female. More chapters please!
Thank you Ms. Sinclair for your tender and arousing story. The mixture of tenderness with dominance is rare. I placed myself in the fantasy and enjoyed it thoroughly. I look forward to more if you have the desire to write it!
Regards,
-Carl