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All Comments on 'New God Rising - Ch. 03: Faithful'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Interesting concept. Somewhat intriguing, but not exactly my cup of tea. I believe in a more benevolent deity, so I think I’ll pass on future installments.

4.5 stars, rounded up to 5 for a very well-written tale.

Tc

DaddydonthurtmeDaddydonthurtme4 months ago

Looking forward to what the new worlds will offer. 5 stars on all chapters so far. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.

Robbb_FangRobbb_Fang4 months ago

Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I agree with @anon, this god seems cruel and capricious. Just not fun with his ex being on a cold floor with a hood on?

ZephyrwhirlZephyrwhirlabout 1 month ago

Having read these first 3 chapters it's definitely an interesting story. And could see this being quite encompassing, in it's already written branches.

I would also agree, however, that the god figure seems to be high on revenge towards his ex-gf.

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