All Comments on 'New Job Explorations'

Thanks so much. 5 stars.

I agree with anon. I think this would be an excellent series

For me i found it a bit stiff and formal. It's entirely possible that English is a second language for you, if so awesome job. There was lots to praise and enjoy in this story. I understand the protagonist in the story was American born, the thing i couldn't get was how late the Dutch antagonist was. She was constantly late for every meeting, and found that to be strange. Just didn't fit logically for me, sorry. Also, didn't quite understand how or why she would be railroaded with that email, might have been me not paying attention. Sorry

Just thanks for the feedback I received. Indeed Dutch is my first language, so somewhat formal is not to be evaded. A second installment? Sure, but will take a while, for I do have a rather demanding job

More more, so much more to develop, can,t wait to s re where it goes, so many possible alleys and road this could go down. Love your style of writing, so fresh and NEW

I loved this. It did not matter that occasionally your idiomatic English was not perfect, because the story and your protagonists were. You have given us a treat. I shall be watching for more as time allows. Thank you.

I could never write a story as good as this in a language not my own. Please write more.

The level of detail is exquisite and so touching.

I would have like them to make love more than once, but it is still a good story.

You waste a LOT of time with misc. bullshit!!!

Lost me at "Trump Country".