All Comments on 'New Job with Benefits'

A few minor spelling or grammar errors, but well told. Going to explore the Personal Benefits in part 2?

Good to see another posting from you, though what happened to your excelent story "Just this Once"?

This latest one isn't quite so good, but perhaps it's only part 1. I would just mention that you use "allot" instead of "a lot" in this tale.

Hope to see you again soon.

Not a bad read but you left me hanging. I was awaiting a climax that didn't come.

I suggest that you re-read your stories before pressing the 'publish' button as there are a number of grammatical errors and typos contained in the story that were distracting. Some of these errors should have been picked up by your spell checker -- assuming you used one -- but others would only be picked up by a thorough editorial read.

I enjoyed reading this story but it stopped ratjer suddenly, leaving the reader hanging. Surely there will be a new chapter where we find out how far Peter will push Carol.

I liked the story but why turn it around?

Well written liked the theme, however unlikely but really thought it would have been better in chronological order.