by MicKay
i love how this one is going.
couldn't stop laughing at Anthony being teased by his brothers.
be good to see what happens with Emma.
Can't wait to see what happen when Emma wakes up. I hope she gives Tony a run for his money as he is so wonderfully naughty.
LOL at the beginning with the noisy kids, I think we can all relate to that! Loved the banter between the brothers, and Gabe being so understanding of his brothers feelings for Em! You had me going for a while there,I was so relieved that it wasn't Em that was taken! Sigh! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Love the ending...I was so relieved it was them in the rafters. I just came across this the other night so I haven't read the American Court. But I like Gabriel. I like the contrast you draw between the two brothers with Gabe being so comfortable with his feelings and Antony being so afraid of his. I like that he has looked to his brother and Edward (is he their dad?) to help him solve the problems. That was really gross and sad that Sophie came to such an end. Enjoying the story alot. Waiting for more.
You really should read New Kingdom American Court first then you would know that there are seven brothers, six kingdoms and that Gabe is the seventh brother and now the ruler of all of the Third Creation. If you liked Gabe in this one you will love him in New Kingdom American Court! Trust me you won't be sorry!
I can't wait to read the next chapter! Such an incredible and creative plot. I love the characters and your heroine and hero are devastating together. ;) Thanks for the story!
ooh more plotting going on. can't wait for the next chapter. @ cannd, i'm with willie, if you just found this story, do read american court first, that will explain a lot of things and get you up to speed with this one. you won't be disappointed.
But I do like Emma, so I'm hoping he turns the corner.
I think he was cutting it a little too close. I can't believe anthony is being so thick headed. I know his brothers love him and want him to figure out his feelings, but part of me just wants gabe to smack the snot out of him. You have done a wonderful job with Emma. Her internal dialogue is more indearing than depressing. I even caught myself smiling while I was reading some of Emma's thoughts. I sincerely hope that Anthony can get past his insecurities. You have done a great job with these characters. Oh, and is there any way I can request another one of the bucket treatments for George? :)
Now w/ 3 brothers in Europe fighting for justice, the action can only increase. And the shock Emma has received is only the beginning. I'm hoping to see Atena help her along her journey. Moving on to Chapter 4 right now.
LOVIN THE KINGDOM SERIES.. 5 STARS FOR EACH CHAPTER. THIS STORY AND THE CHARACTER YOU HAVE CREATED HAVE CAPTURED ALL MY INTEREST AND I DOUT NOTHING WILL GET DONE UNTIL I'VE READ THEM ALL.. GREAT WORK!