All Comments on 'New Neighbors'

I'm not really a writer but I am a keen reader, and this really appeals. The background is excellent but the most appealing aspect (apart from Lori of course!) is the humour which is both natural and in character. I also like how that same humour heightens the sexual 'tension' between the character and illuminates their antics.

I, for one, like these two folks a lot and look forward to their continuing story

My kind of woman. I've been with the skinnies and you're right. They are generally a pain in the butt. Your writing is good, your humor is well appreciated, and the sex is not over stated. Well done. Ronnie W.

Great start to a long series of stories. Nice style of writing. How about continuing with her presenting him her lovely ass or move to a DP in a threesome with someone from work.

You zoned right into the joys of sex in real life. And well written, too. To say nothing about giving me a determined boner.

Very erotic. So when is Laurie's tummy going to start growing?

This story line is really worth expanding.

I hope you do so.