All Comments on 'New Office Slut'

Haha loved the ending

Seriously. Not a bad concept or story here but god the spelling and grammar errors. And typing is all over the place. Just look it over before you post.

hey nony mouse, give the kid a break, have you not heard of 'stream of conscience'? that is how good sex is , no commas , no polite punctuation, just fast and to the point. modern poetry> get with the script... ;}

Oof it was a pretty good story, but give them names next