All Comments on 'New Rider 1'

I love this.

Having beta read the whole story, I can tell you, you are in for a good ride ... (see what I did there?)

Read through and enjoyed it ...

the only clinker was the comparisons to things "whatever they were." ... No need ... surely you could find something meaningful from the era you are describing.

Good start, I agree that the "Whatever they were" comments were egregious and interruptive. Looking forward to the next episode.

Very good start - thank you

Really great story. Wish I didn’t have to wait on the next mouth full.

@Monagamous_Now: don’t be rubbing it in that you’ve already read this tale and we need to wait for it to rollout over the next 5 days. That is just needlessly mean 😞

Btw, really love this story so far and as always, your characters draw me in. Thx for sharing.

Good so far anxiously waiting for the rest!

Nice start Looking forward to the rest.

[vitochi] LOL! I'm super-thankful for MN. He makes this whole process so much easier -- and helps you all by filtering some of the crap out.

This is off to a great start. I truly do not mind the "whatever that is" phrases, it is a humorous and harmless bit of the tale.

Interesting set of characters you have written. Not too sure where this is going but will read on.

A fine start to what I'm sure will be another captivating tale. The little details and the humor add greatly to the story. Well done.