by macktosh
I have really enjoyed reading this and the previous chapter. You are really gifted at writing, so engaging and arousing! Please continue to submit work to literotica. I can't believe you're new at this.. it's so good.
I'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks! :)
And I hope there will be a part 3 (perhaps more?). Thank you for sharing this with us!
Loved both parts of this intimate caring story! Very well written with its erotic descriptive style. Hope there will be more with the relationship going in whatever direction that you care to take it. Great job so far!
I really love the story and the characters. Any chance there will be a third chapter?
Did I say, more, more, more? Why, yes. I think I did.
Really some brilliant writing here.
I love how your stories become intimate right from the start. It is also refreshing to feature women who aren't natural DD's, as much erotica tends to do. I typically prefer smaller breasts.
Your characters are so lovable, I can't decide which one I'd like to be.
You have a way with words. Very sexy. I know this written awhile ago but I would love a part 3. Thank you