All Comments on 'New Roommate Pt. 02'

by macktosh

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silverwolf55silverwolf55about 5 years ago
Such amazing erotic literary style!

I have really enjoyed reading this and the previous chapter. You are really gifted at writing, so engaging and arousing! Please continue to submit work to literotica. I can't believe you're new at this.. it's so good.

I'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks! :)

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 5 years ago
Very good second part!

And I hope there will be a part 3 (perhaps more?). Thank you for sharing this with us!

ImASlaveToYouBabyImASlaveToYouBabyabout 5 years ago
Dude.

I'm gonna keep this short and sweet. 👍🙌🙏

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Sweet Story!

Loved both parts of this intimate caring story! Very well written with its erotic descriptive style. Hope there will be more with the relationship going in whatever direction that you care to take it. Great job so far!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another awesome story

I really love the story and the characters. Any chance there will be a third chapter?

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 4 years ago

Did I say, more, more, more? Why, yes. I think I did.

Really some brilliant writing here.

Only_connectOnly_connectover 3 years ago

Just four little words:

So good. More please

dogged1dogged1over 2 years ago

I love how your stories become intimate right from the start. It is also refreshing to feature women who aren't natural DD's, as much erotica tends to do. I typically prefer smaller breasts.

kittenbritcheskittenbritchesover 2 years ago

Your characters are so lovable, I can't decide which one I'd like to be.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

More please. Another part

briboy69briboy699 months ago

You have a way with words. Very sexy. I know this written awhile ago but I would love a part 3. Thank you

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I'm an amateur writer who specializes in F/F pairings, cute romance, and safe, consensual BDSM. Feel free to message me about ideas, feedback, editing, whatever. 3/5/2021 Update: Hello! It's been a while. I wasn’t able to write much in 2020, and I won't be able to write much...

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