All Comments on 'New Wife'

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Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

Nice father daughter short. Keep writing and develop your plot a little more and lengthen your story. Was a good story for your first post here,

beckbuckleybeckbuckleyover 1 year ago

Nice. Would have given it a 5/5

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Stupid

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