All Comments on 'Newlyweds First Anal Experience'

You were doing a good job, but you rushed it on the ending. Another thing. I appreciate the Christian angle. For some reason us Christians tend to be so uptight about sex when God created sex to be enjoyed between 2 people.

Nice, but rushed to ending. Take your time and let's hear about you, husband, and your friend from work in the next chapter. Plus, how about a little more descriptive details about how you sucked his cock and how it felt in your ass, etc.

You show a lot of potential talent. Now backtrack a little and enhance your actual anal initiation and the continuation of your sexual awakening.

It took me 5 years to get my wife to "open anally" and we have enjoyed it immensely, so you have hit a few "tender points" with us.....

I agree with some of the commentators here, i.e. a bit rushed, but... this is still a v hot and quite believable story. I hope we hear more from you, you're obviously a budding talent. Thanks for posting.