by SonjaMeyers
I agree with some of the commentators here, i.e. a bit rushed, but... this is still a v hot and quite believable story. I hope we hear more from you, you're obviously a budding talent. Thanks for posting.
You show a lot of potential talent. Now backtrack a little and enhance your actual anal initiation and the continuation of your sexual awakening.
It took me 5 years to get my wife to "open anally" and we have enjoyed it immensely, so you have hit a few "tender points" with us.....
Nice, but rushed to ending. Take your time and let's hear about you, husband, and your friend from work in the next chapter. Plus, how about a little more descriptive details about how you sucked his cock and how it felt in your ass, etc.
You were doing a good job, but you rushed it on the ending. Another thing. I appreciate the Christian angle. For some reason us Christians tend to be so uptight about sex when God created sex to be enjoyed between 2 people.