by perl10
Keep up the good work. This piece is hilarious. I have not laughed so much in years. I do wish there was more about the Kingdom and its sex and spanking activities, and less of the liberal / conservative drivel – you tend to sound like Rush Limbaugh’s speechwriter. And, to keep referring to the actions of the "First Moron" / "Great Decider" / "President" is to take the fun out of the whole, delicious, affair.
Really was hoping for less of a political tirade and more of an alternative sexual reality. At least you put it all together so the reader can skim past it.....
I got hooked on this storyline...I'm conservative, and a christian and am open minded to the whole storyline..but damn, it's so fucking tedious. I too was hoping for less politicization and more alternative lifestyle descriptions. Good writing, but I had to skim past so much.