All Comments on 'Next on the List'

by JukeboxEMCSA

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
TrueApotheosisTrueApotheosisalmost 2 years ago

I love the idea of some shady group of people slowly brainwashing people, adding each person to its ranks and growing slowly and unstoppable, but I wish we'd gotten more detail on them. Leaving things shady and uncertain can add a lot, but this feels like it crossed the line and left things a little too ambiguous

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Such an incredibly hot story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I Think we need a new. Part to know what happened to Sarah too quickly

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Makes rohypnol sound benign. Comes across like a twisted version of H.G. Well's The Island of Dr. Moreau. Yikes!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous