All Comments on 'Next Time Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great continuation

Glad you continued with the story. I had enjoyed reading the previous chapters years ago and have reread them a few times. I hope you will continue as I love the story and your writing style.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
You should have left this alone.

A badly conceived, poorly written continuation. So implausible that I had to laugh.

Even for fiction this was awful.

Marcie4youMarcie4youover 8 years ago
Too much....

"Sir" crap!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
nicely done

Really enjoy reading this hope you continue with it and ignore some of the more rude comments

sams508sams508over 8 years ago
GREAT STORY

I WOULD LOVE TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS,THANKS FOR THE STORIES.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Damn!

This story kept me hard all the way through. Pay no attention to the negative comments, this story is wonderful. If my own wife was able to accept my cross dressing in a single moment, despite her religious upbringing, then other wives could accept Matt/Maria's fate instantly as well.

Need more please... does Sarah stay with the family?

sissyrobin2000sissyrobin2000over 1 year ago

A sissy dream loved it

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I am 52 years old. I enjoy writing D/s related material from the submissive point of view. This is my first shot at writing erotica, but hope to hone my skills as I continue. I live in Arizona, but travel throughout the west, mostly to Denver, SLC, Vegas, Seattle, Portland ...

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