All Comments on 'Nice Boots: Fancy a Shag?'

by nancygibson

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Masterly!

What a competent writer Nancy is! I hope we have much more to come!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow

I am very impressed at the eroticism, considering she has written about a lifestyle and look about which I know very little. But the writing and pacing are excellent. Well done!

terryqterryqover 18 years ago
Great

I always like erotic stories written by a woman. She's got to know how a female really likes sex and how a woman actually feels about wanting to fuck; what turns them on and not just what a man wants a woman to want or feel.

Good going and give us some more straight from the genitals.

Terrible Thomas

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
write more please

all I have to say is please write more. These stories are hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nice boots

Brilliant story.

Utterly.. mmm.

Your writing really conjured up some great imagery, thank you (:

However, and this is ridiculously minor, 'You taste good' seemed somewhat unnatural for the character to say.

That's perhaps just me, though.

Keep up the good work. :D

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenalmost 16 years ago
I really enjoyed your story

I had to read it after the title reminded me of one of the most unusual pick up lines I'd gotten at a bar. This guy walks up to me and says, I see you're wearing heels, want to dance?

deCarabas_hjdeCarabas_hjabout 15 years ago
Five stars

Thank you.

snare13snare13about 15 years ago
goth + sex = love

As someone who grew up in the goth community, I must say that this story really nails it. I'm 19 but I was raised by my goth aunt who had a club till two years ago, so I know what I'm talking about. Very hot sex, well-written and well-paced, the clothes sounded yummy too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nice visuals, one grating point

Aww, I love how you put in background here and the fact that your descriptions of the people are things I actually can imaging and find attractive.

One thing though: certainly here in Britain, it's 'Nice boots, wanna fuck?'!

lusherlusherover 11 years ago
you made a goth smile...

...and as everyone knows, that's quite an accomplishment! Sorry, I'll see myself out (but not before I tell you what a lovely story you've written, as hot as it is romantic).

sidandnancy20sidandnancy20over 11 years ago
reminds me of the old days

this reminds me of occasions at Rock City when the title was a regular chat up line. it worked on me more than a few times im happy to say. excellent story, more of the same thanks

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