by nancygibson
What a competent writer Nancy is! I hope we have much more to come!
I am very impressed at the eroticism, considering she has written about a lifestyle and look about which I know very little. But the writing and pacing are excellent. Well done!
I always like erotic stories written by a woman. She's got to know how a female really likes sex and how a woman actually feels about wanting to fuck; what turns them on and not just what a man wants a woman to want or feel.
Good going and give us some more straight from the genitals.
Terrible Thomas
all I have to say is please write more. These stories are hot
Brilliant story.
Utterly.. mmm.
Your writing really conjured up some great imagery, thank you (:
However, and this is ridiculously minor, 'You taste good' seemed somewhat unnatural for the character to say.
That's perhaps just me, though.
Keep up the good work. :D
I had to read it after the title reminded me of one of the most unusual pick up lines I'd gotten at a bar. This guy walks up to me and says, I see you're wearing heels, want to dance?
As someone who grew up in the goth community, I must say that this story really nails it. I'm 19 but I was raised by my goth aunt who had a club till two years ago, so I know what I'm talking about. Very hot sex, well-written and well-paced, the clothes sounded yummy too.
Aww, I love how you put in background here and the fact that your descriptions of the people are things I actually can imaging and find attractive.
One thing though: certainly here in Britain, it's 'Nice boots, wanna fuck?'!
...and as everyone knows, that's quite an accomplishment! Sorry, I'll see myself out (but not before I tell you what a lovely story you've written, as hot as it is romantic).
this reminds me of occasions at Rock City when the title was a regular chat up line. it worked on me more than a few times im happy to say. excellent story, more of the same thanks