All Comments on 'Nice Guys Always Finish Last'

A nice story. A little short, but good. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Loved the sweet romance and would love more! However, I've got to say that Jennie reminds me of a certain Korean YouTube vlogger by the name of Jeannie with a million followers...hmmm...coincidence?

The ending felt rushed.

I am uncertain the way you wrote her, if in real life such a girl would stay faithful or if so, happy.

She was sort of old to realize why running with bad boys doesnt work out.

And she treated him badly, for years.

So I would have made this longer, added more how she changed into someone that appreciated him before hooking them up.

Is not bad at all, but could seriously use an editor to get rid of a lot of unnecessary wording and clean up the Grammer and flow of things. With the right editor you could seriously improve the level of storytelling and stories.

Needs editing, but the real question is "why would he want her?" A very one sided relationship where Jennie just takes and takes

Have you been spying on me? I had a "Jennie" (although Chinese) who I was in love with for the longest time. Unlike the story, we never crossed the line between best friends and lover, and regret it ever since. God, the memories this story brings back. Thank you

Jenny really doesn't seem a character worth waiting for. Honestly a case can be made against her. She came back to protagonist as soon as she realised he is in a stable job and minting money. And came back to immediately have a child.