by TheKingWright
Short and sweet. Thanks for the update. Looking for the next episode.
Cheers
SAGE
Oops!!!
Things are going to get very messy, very messy indeed!
How long before the sibling threesome, can’t be too far away.
5/5 again, next chapter please ASAP.
Incredible series - anxious to see where you're taking us! Where's mom? 5*
A great episode of great series.
The only downside is the names. I'm having a hard time knowing who is who. Jennifer, Jessica and Jessi. A bit too similar.
Echoing Kallefake's comment, the names are too similar, which is confusing for the readers and, it seems, confusing for you too. That aside, I enjoyed reading this series!
brill story telling,i am enjoying the story so far,can't wait for more.
Love the drama. Excellent series.
The three women with J names has been a little confusing. It doesn’t affect my enjoyment of the story but if you had a Kaitlin or Eve or Wanda instead of the three J’s that would have been helpful in keeping track of the characters as they are introduced.
Your series had me glued, I couldn’t stop reading! Cant wait til the next chapter!!!
4/5 stars for this chapter...not even gonna go into why...if you do not know (as the author) I am not gonna say anything.
Suffice it to say...NOT HAPPY with this chapter!