All Comments on 'Nick Helps Val with a Problem'

by Cerby565

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayalmost 12 years ago
Good story

Good story and as said below realistic, so it was fast? there is time for the slow lovemaking now that the virginity thing is out of the way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Very good story

Realistic story that is interesting and not over the top. keep writing you have good perspective.

CajunBillCajunBillalmost 12 years ago
Cerby

Do you plan to continue this? This first submission is well written, but is a 'slam-bam' and that's all. ~CajunBill

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