All Comments on 'Nick Helps Val with a Problem'

Do you plan to continue this? This first submission is well written, but is a 'slam-bam' and that's all. ~CajunBill

Realistic story that is interesting and not over the top. keep writing you have good perspective.

Good story and as said below realistic, so it was fast? there is time for the slow lovemaking now that the virginity thing is out of the way.