by nevets13
I guess Pete is like the majority of guys, says he loves Nicky but doesn't mean it when he's finished with her and has other opportunities. Boy Scout my ass!
Your writing skills are very good, it's great to be able to enjoy a well written story. Looking forward to more chapters!
Nothing can kill a good story quicker than spelling and grammar issues. I have lost track of the number of stories with potential that flushed it straight down the drain due to the lack of spellcheck.
I eagerly await the next chapter.