All Comments on 'Nickie and Me Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I thought he said he loved Nicky

I guess Pete is like the majority of guys, says he loves Nicky but doesn't mean it when he's finished with her and has other opportunities. Boy Scout my ass!

Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69over 7 years ago
Well done!

Your writing skills are very good, it's great to be able to enjoy a well written story. Looking forward to more chapters!

FrozenindrumFrozenindrumover 7 years ago
Nice character development and bonus points for the attention to grammar.

Nothing can kill a good story quicker than spelling and grammar issues. I have lost track of the number of stories with potential that flushed it straight down the drain due to the lack of spellcheck.

I eagerly await the next chapter.

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