All Comments on 'Nicole and Kate: Beginnings'

Glad you edited/resubmitted and hope you continue this provocative, steamy, intense tale. Not sure where your imagination is taking us — after all you are exploring your fantasies, but prefer a story about the relationship between Nicole and Kate than one where Kate is simply setting up Nicole for 3-way with husband.

that is the ultimate journey, giving myself to an older woman

great start, can't wait for more :)

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Enjoyed the story but have to agree with migbird about the direction. Hope you let this flow with how Nicole feels and acts physically and emotionally.

I agree with Milburn. I'm glad you reposted an edited version & would also like to see their relationship explored more than the threesome. I look forward to seeing where you take it though. Don't rush, we'll wait for the edited version.

very sensual more please

EXCELLENT FIRST CHAPTER VERY STEAMY AND YES WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE, RATING 5

Excellent story, well written and the sexual descriptions of Kate and Nicole was stellar. Loved how you described how Kate skillfully seduced Nicole into possible being her submissive play thing. Your description of Nicole's body made my mouth water and tongue get hard wishing I could have Nicole. Great Story, gave it a definite 5, and hoping that you intend to develop more chapters of the potential sex activities of these two. Do keep the husband out of the story as it would, I believe, ruin the overall seduction theme. Keep this going please.

Oh, love this!!

Oh , what sexy love! Nicole is in sexual heaven!..more to cum!