All Comments on 'Nicole's Job Interview'

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tnadnudertnadnuderover 10 years ago
A few key mistakes...

...Took me out of it. Among them:

1] "While that it is definitely a great..."

2] "and said in an extremely sexy voice, murmured,..."

On the other hand, I would again suggest stories about Donna & some of the other secretaries you refer to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thank you

Thanks for pointing those out. This was one of my first submissions I hadn't yet met my editor. I'll try to avoid those kind of mistakes in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great work

Fucking hot!

LudovicaLudovicaover 8 years ago
I want this to be me...

My name is Nicole, 5'2 in height and dream to be a submissive. I love how her character description perfectly fits me, I feel like it's actually me on the situation..

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