All Comments on 'Nicole's Job Interview'

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LudovicaLudovicaover 8 years ago
I want this to be me...

My name is Nicole, 5'2 in height and dream to be a submissive. I love how her character description perfectly fits me, I feel like it's actually me on the situation..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great work

Fucking hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thank you

Thanks for pointing those out. This was one of my first submissions I hadn't yet met my editor. I'll try to avoid those kind of mistakes in the future.

tnadnudertnadnuderover 10 years ago
A few key mistakes...

...Took me out of it. Among them:

1] "While that it is definitely a great..."

2] "and said in an extremely sexy voice, murmured,..."

On the other hand, I would again suggest stories about Donna & some of the other secretaries you refer to.

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