All Comments on 'Nicole's Night Out'

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Amiable69Amiable69over 2 years ago

Hot story! And very well written. Well done! Amy x

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 2 years ago

I stopped reading when you dragged out every idiotic trope disparaging the husband in order to justify adultery. Surprise you didn’t make him fat, stupid and had bad teeth and worse body odour.

Seriously, that’s how bad this was.

DunkirkDunkirkover 2 years ago

Hope she shows hubby the baby bump he black lovers sent her home with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

In chapter 2 just let this "couple" get divorced. There is no love in this story no emotions just really unlikeable characters. If the woman wants to be cum slutwhore for black men, fine write about it but don't drag out the story with the white husband. And don't forget to make sure you write about how the wife explains to the kids about the spade tattoo on her body and why their step brother or sister is black. And how her black boyfriends pimp her out.

jmcox261jmcox261over 2 years ago

Don't listen to those naysayers. If they don't like this kind of story, then they just shouldn't read it. I loved it! Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story, hope for many sequels

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You have to wonder about folks who like stories like this (shakes head sadly).

auhound49auhound49over 2 years ago
more preg risk sex...

Wonderful story! Now what happens?

More please!

coolstrangeravenuecoolstrangeravenueover 2 years ago

fantastic. hope her friend has more plans to try and get her knocked up

SomehowyouSomehowyouover 2 years ago

Great first story. Keep them cumming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I had a coloured baby when I went on a girls holiday and my husband found out at the delivery called me a slut changed the locks on our house and divorced me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So why did Nicole ever marry David? She's a drunken druggie slut with no morals. She does not even like, let alone love her husband. She finds her kids to be a burden. Simply take a morning after pill or get an abortion.

954Hard954Hard3 months ago

Laura knew that Nicole was ripe and ready to be black bred. Such a good friend. Laura will , no doubt, be the god mother of the child. And Nicole, no doubt, will be spreading her legs for more black cock.

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