by JimBob44
Hey JimBob, this is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. Thank you,
JBA who used to be anonymous who always asked you to write about a minor character line in "Honey, Darling and Me", Peace
Really heart breaking and so well written. Why do little kids get afflicted with this dread disease?! 5*s and at least it ends well!
I would venture to say that virtually everyone reading these stories is closely related to or well acquainted with someone who lost their battle against cancer. For many, it is multiple instances. I find it impossible to read this story and remain unaffected.
Wishing good health to all in 2021.
Just come back to this after reading The Garbage King and it's still has heart rending as the first couple of times I read it. Please keep up the good work.
...you hit the spot and what a sweet, sweet love story. So sad, so beautiful.
Thank you
It was short and sad and oh so sweet! I wished that 10 stars were available, all I could give you were 5!
Thanks for the ride!
Morgan DeWolfe
The Lit app version of this story is badly fragmented and truncated.
It's unreadable and needs fixing.
I liked the way you showed love between one man & two women. One a sister other a lover. The difference in feelings was done well.
Thanx. The 5th star.
Any cancer story gets me - i lost my mom to it. That was fucking hard, i can't imagine losing a sibling (and thank god i can't imagine losing a child) but your story really gets the emotions. Really well written.
Much to short but your best romance story so far. I read the others but refused to grade them, this one was beautiful.
Ed
This was a very sweet, very touching little story.
I usually like long stories and was prepared to not like the intermittent flashback style, but it actually worked well for this story. Good job!
I can't count how many times I have read and reread this story and it still brings tears to these old eyes. The love of a big brother for his little sister and the love of her best friend for both of them is very touching and heart warming indeed.
I feel you deserve as many positive comments as possible. This story was done well. It's obvious that all your stories are well thought out and deliberate, indicating a very complex and self-aware personality. You write very strong stories that are hard to form a comment on. We all realize that they are your stories and you give plenty of warning as to their make-up. Thanks for the entertainment...
OldMarineVet- RonRWood
So enjoy reading this story of the absolute love for the sister by the older brother and her best friend.
Not just a wonderful story, but a wonderfully told story. Completely engaging. Thanks.
Too bad there isnt a rating higher than 5, . You were right a real tear jerk-er, warm and loving . Thanks for a wonderful story, Keep up the good work.....Bob
You weren't kidding, real tear jerker. Unbelievably touching. I'd give it a 5 if the rating stars were working
loved the story because its a "LOVE STORY" and not a slam bam story keep it up
Your right. Tear jerker.
By the way, you don't have to shave the head for Locks of Love. It just can't be colored or permed but I love the reasoning of why she did it.