All Comments on 'Night Eternal Ch. 05'

I love it I love it. This series is great. I just wish you could get each chapter out quicker. I can't wait to read the next one.

I am lovin this story. The different points of view have been great.I have seen other try the split view and it does not work. Great job on the story line. The permission at the end was so perfect. (well all but IT WAS "THE END" of chapter PART) LOL Please post again soon.

May be the best one yet. Very effective fight-scene: interesting and exciting, well-detailed and not routine. Routine fighting is perhaps even worse than routine sex. Looking forward to the rest!

Another good chapter with action and a bit of tension. I'm still not seeing a lot of character development though.

Smashing, and definately like how it details more the newly turned friend and vampire society.