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dommasterjimdommasterjimabout 1 year ago

WOW...!!! YESss !! Author told us an Amazing story about these two..!!!

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 1 year ago

Lovely conclusion. You write so well, I really enjoyed this. Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Any chance Rose could show up on Jack’s doorstep? Tears in her eyes and a suitcase in each hand? “Jack, I don’t care about our ages; I don’t care what others might say; I don’t care about the obvious complications. I don’t think I’ll ever find another like you. Can we try? Please?”

GaiusPetroniusGaiusPetroniusabout 1 year ago

You've built on the first installment to produce a lovely follow-on. Unfortunately, the grammar, punctuation, and syntax errors were glaring and spoiled my reading experience.

By all means carry on. Just get yourself a skilled editor.

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