All Comments on 'Night Games Pt. 16'

I could not be more thrilled with this chapter. I figured the emerald was a fake with a tracker but the rest of this information is totally fucking brilliant and was completely worth waiting for. You really know how to build suspense and a wonderful exciting story and I thank you for doing all that. This chapter has made my day so much better and I can’t wait to see the next chapter. PS. You fucking rock!

J.D.

Thanks. Hoping the next one delivers the same.

So having spent all my free minutes the last days reading this, I have one comment and one question:

Great story, a femme fatale of the highest and most intriguing order with loads of fun - thanks for sharing!

What the heck am I supposed to do whilst waiting for the next chapter?

I try to time things so Literotica drops them on Fridays. They've got chapter 17 already. Talk to them, maybe they'll get it out faster.